Ode to the attic
Oh you open mouth of yawning darkness that I approach,
With face mask and goggles and knee guards in place,
And a flyswatter in hand,
...just in case.

Up into that area of darkness and heat,
While bracing my New Balances attached to my feet.
I dimly view wood rafters angled above,
Silent witnesses to the Kraft-faced R-19 and R-30
That I roll and I shove.

I feel like a dung beetle rolling its prize,
of Big, pink containers so great in size,
On the tar-paper road of the attic’s spine,
To reach that distant other side, that’s fine.

Then, lo and behold, I can’t believe my eyes!
I see a tiny white light on the distant far side!
‘I must be dead’ was my very first thought,
and died between attic entrance and the R-19 we had bought,
‘Come to the Light’ a deep voice called to me,
as slowly I moved forward on knee-guarded knees,
My breathing was fast, my eyeguards went foggy,
As I crawled toward that light, my clothes sweaty-soggy.

“I’m coming, I’m coming! Please wait for me!”
Pleaded I to the light through my stifling mask,
as I Crawled through the attic, a difficult task.

As I neared that white light, it suddenly occurred,
Something wasn’t quite right,
Something frankly absurd!,
Why did my bladder, part of physical being...
Warn me that soon I’d need to be p_ _ing!

It was at that moment of pure clarity,
I realized DH had turned on the ‘drop light’ for us to see.
Packages of insulation stacked hither and yon,
Rolls of pink containers like giant bon-bons.

Of pushing and pulling and cutting to size,
Of rolling and placing the fluffy pink gauze.
It took a week,
but we can smilingly speak,
“It’s complete!”



















Posted by: Bermuda on 08/20/18
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Posted by: lhogan57 on 08/20/18
It does rhyme if you follow the commas.
For some reason the chat doesn’t allow me keep it in the stanzas I typed it in.
Posted by: Bermuda on 08/20/18
Brava! On both accomplishments!
Posted by: maryann8121 on 08/20/18
Rhyming poems are only ones I understand. Lol
Posted by: lhogan57 on 08/20/18
OMG Bermuda that's so awesome!!! Laughing so hard.... hope you got your bathroom break after :D
Posted by: craftydivakat on 08/20/18
Wow! Wonderful poem! Nice job of writing.
Posted by: susiebelle7 on 08/20/18
You missed your calling. You should have been a writer
I always read your chats, they are so funny. And GOOD.
Posted by: surt8511 on 08/20/18
And the award for the poetic posting of "Pink BonBons In The Attic" goes to Bermuda, Queen of the Funny Quips! That
is enough bowing, please no more bows, okay okay that's wonderful, please quit clapping audience and no more laughs. That's enough laughing. No joke Bermuda, that was an awesome job you and DH did. You get so much accomplished while it seems like am always looking for something. Now, more time for stitching. You deserve it. Pam It did show up in stanzas on mine.
Posted by: pamelastine11 on 08/20/18
Hey, Bermuda. Have you been to the Silver Needle? It's in Tulsa and brick and mortar. A neat shop and so fun because you can prowl around and they have everything you could want. I am thankful for ECS because it gives me access to cross stitch, but it is fun for "the good old days" of prowling around a store,looking at fabric, and charms and patterns. Maybe in your travels some day take a side trip to Tulsa. Peace.. Pam
Posted by: pamelastine11 on 08/20/18
Bermuda - you never cease to amaze me with your prose! As everyone else said, kudos to you - applause, whistles, cheers, pats on the back etc. Next, you will be flying to Stockholm to receive the Nobel Prize in Literature!!
Posted by: jmirz on 08/21/18